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Oct 16, 2012 5:44 am RichardMVickery RichardMVickery "removed image of Tony Nicklinson by request"
Sep 23, 2012 4:25 am suz.azevedo suz.azevedo "Changed figure label for figure 3"
Sep 23, 2012 2:59 am LisaSato LisaSato "Referenced Tony Nicklinson"
Sep 22, 2012 6:57 pm suz.azevedo suz.azevedo "Made general grammatical changes and tried to shorten sentences and word count as much as possible"
Sep 22, 2012 5:14 am LisaSato LisaSato "cutted down "Appendix" to 483 words. "
Sep 22, 2012 1:30 am brina.k brina.k "Re-wrote the appendix with the bullet points now as paragraphs. Its 500ish words, is that too long? Girls please have a read and cut where you can! Thanks, Brina"
Sep 22, 2012 1:25 am brina.k brina.k
Sep 20, 2012 9:19 pm LisaSato LisaSato "Also, edited the psychological section, can u check the discussion girls? I have a question.."
Sep 20, 2012 9:17 pm LisaSato LisaSato "Updates on case study (Tony) as he passed away after the first editorial"
Sep 20, 2012 7:59 pm LisaSato LisaSato
Sep 20, 2012 7:39 pm LisaSato LisaSato "Fixed a few grammatical errors and edited the images and "cause" section"
Sep 20, 2012 6:35 pm LisaSato LisaSato "Review that was over the due date removed"
Sep 20, 2012 5:22 pm brina.k brina.k "looked over comments and wrote notes for appendix as a whole group in the meeting today, Friday 21st September after the tutorial"
Sep 20, 2012 5:30 am JamieD JamieD
Sep 20, 2012 5:29 am JamieD JamieD
Sep 19, 2012 5:59 am LucianaBranco LucianaBranco
Sep 19, 2012 5:43 am LucianaBranco LucianaBranco
Sep 19, 2012 3:41 am brina.k brina.k
Sep 19, 2012 3:39 am brina.k brina.k
Sep 19, 2012 3:36 am brina.k brina.k "shortened the treatment/technology section and cut down redundant information (i hope) as suggested from the reviews. Only worry is that these sections now lack detail?"